Awesome! I like the counting bit but the last line kind of leaves it hanging a bit. I would have liked if you captured a bit more of the movement and "hurling down" sounds a bit dismissive. I know you are constrained by the specifics of the form, but still, it left a bit.
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Awesome! I like the counting bit but the last line kind of leaves it hanging a bit. I would have liked if you captured a bit more of the movement and "hurling down" sounds a bit dismissive. I know you are constrained by the specifics of the form, but still, it left a bit.
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